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- It has been awhile since I have done anything with this. I had opened a peer review on this almost 9 months ago, and have only received comments from a now banned user. I've written what I think to be a fairly complete summary, listed canon/non-canon characters, etc., all the jazz that I think makes our non-canon articles good. We even have that fun behind the scenes info on how the cover was created. --OuroborosCobra talk 15:32, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
- Comment. I'm not sure how to put my finger on it, but, aside from the Summary, the text looks sort of bare-bones and formal. Sort of the difference between a telephone book (what I see here) and a travel brochure (making it interesting to the uninitiated). Particularly in the background, I'd like to see what you observed as worthy of mention. Was there anything unusual as far as the way characters or technology were depicted? Were there thematic similarities to any other episodes? How do we arrive at the date we've established for this story? I'm not a big fan of character sections, but it looks like the standard we have for these sort of pages. If it could be made to look more like what was done with "Ghosts", the only other Featured comic we've had, that would go a long way toward improving the visual appeal of the article. -- Connor Cabal 15:53, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
- I'll take a look at the comic again, see what I can do to fix that. I of course was hoping to get comments like this in the peer review, but no one seems to look at those (this isn't directed at you Connor Cabal, and in fact I am just as guilty as everyone on that). I probably won't be able to do anything major until Monday, as my schedule probably won't allow me to be on much until then. --OuroborosCobra talk 16:19, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
- Comment. I'm not sure how to put my finger on it, but, aside from the Summary, the text looks sort of bare-bones and formal. Sort of the difference between a telephone book (what I see here) and a travel brochure (making it interesting to the uninitiated). Particularly in the background, I'd like to see what you observed as worthy of mention. Was there anything unusual as far as the way characters or technology were depicted? Were there thematic similarities to any other episodes? How do we arrive at the date we've established for this story? I'm not a big fan of character sections, but it looks like the standard we have for these sort of pages. If it could be made to look more like what was done with "Ghosts", the only other Featured comic we've had, that would go a long way toward improving the visual appeal of the article. -- Connor Cabal 15:53, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
SS uniforms and insignia
- Renomination after an extensive overhaul and rewrite of the entire article. Article's first nomination can be found here. As a result, article was worked over with content added, insignia sections expanded, background section greatly expanded, and images touched up and redone thanks to the awesome work of User:Cid Highwind. With these additions, strongly recommend approval as a Featured Article. -FleetCaptain 17:52, 10 January 2008 (UTC)
- Support. The article has really been improved! -- Rom Ulan 17:54, 10 January 2008 (UTC)