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OK, I've more or less finished the article now. I'm open to all comments and suggestions! [[User:TrekFan|TrekFan]] 22:21, 25 June 2008 (UTC) |
OK, I've more or less finished the article now. I'm open to all comments and suggestions! [[User:TrekFan|TrekFan]] 22:21, 25 June 2008 (UTC) |
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| − | This could be just me, but the number of images in the article just seem to be distracting. The problem I have is that I think they are all good pictures, but the volume of text doesn't support the number of them, not that the volume of text needs to be expanded. I'd suggest removing two(-ish) of the following; Harry, the Bridge, Seven of the final pic. TrekFan, since this is really your baby, I'll leave it up to you (or at least someone else) if this idea is to be implemented. [[User:Tanky|Tanky]] 05:31, 20 August 2008 (UTC) |
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| − | : How's that? I removed the image of Seven taking the transwarp coil. -- [[User:TrekFan|TrekFan]] 17:52, 20 August 2008 (UTC) |
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| − | Works for me [[User:Tanky|Tanky]] 23:17, 20 August 2008 (UTC) |
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| − | : Cool. And thanks for the input. -- [[User:TrekFan|TrekFan]] 23:20, 20 August 2008 (UTC) |
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First Article
This is the first chance I have had at creating an article from scratch and I would appreciate it if I could finish it. I know this is a community project, but if no-one has any objections I would really like to expand this article myself. If anyone has anything to add once I am finished (I will post it here), please do. TrekFan 19:09, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- Hey TrekFan. If you are planning major works, may I reccomend you add the {{inuse}} template at the top of the page. It lets everyone know that this page is a Work in Progress and not to make changes. It's not binding or anything like that, but it's just a heads up. I'll add it for you in this instance, you just need to remove it when you done. Hope that helps Tanky 23:37, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
Oh, thank you very much! I didn't know about that. Thanks. TrekFan 23:39, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
- No probs. The article is looking good so far too btw. Keep up the good work! Tanky 23:41, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for the input! I am trying to get down on paper what should appear in the article. I got the idea do this when, after watching VOY: "Dark Frontier", I couldn't find an article about Operation Fort Knox. I hope my first article turns out OK! Fingers crossed!. TrekFan 06:53, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
OK, I've more or less finished the article now. I'm open to all comments and suggestions! TrekFan 22:21, 25 June 2008 (UTC)