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I'd appreciate constructive comments on this article, and possibly notification if anyone knows of more info that could be added. --[[User:Defiant|Defiant]] 14:53, November 15, 2011 (UTC) |
I'd appreciate constructive comments on this article, and possibly notification if anyone knows of more info that could be added. --[[User:Defiant|Defiant]] 14:53, November 15, 2011 (UTC) |
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| + | :Impressive to say the least...I see you have been listening to the audio and text commentaries of the special editions DVD's, did you also consult the "Captain's Log"-special on Trek III, where Curtis is interviewed? But other than that I believe you've pretty much covered every available bginfo source available (not even the venerable ''Cinefantastique'' has bginfo on Saavik) Two minor points; I find picture content for a bgpiece that large a bit on the low side, especially in the last 2/3rds of the section. The preamble bit "She was '''apparently''' of either full or partial Vulcan heritage.", due to its '''ambiguous''' nature shouldn't be there in my opinion, but rather further up for example after or before "Despite her Vulcan stoicism, Saavik was seen crying at Spock's funeral." Instead of that sentence the preamble could be augmented by a comment in wordings like "Of particular note was her involvement with the failed Genesis project."--[[Special:Contributions/213.10.112.233|213.10.112.233]] 12:10, November 16, 2011 (UTC) |
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I'd appreciate constructive comments on this article, and possibly notification if anyone knows of more info that could be added. --Defiant 14:53, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Impressive to say the least...I see you have been listening to the audio and text commentaries of the special editions DVD's, did you also consult the "Captain's Log"-special on Trek III, where Curtis is interviewed? But other than that I believe you've pretty much covered every available bginfo source available (not even the venerable Cinefantastique has bginfo on Saavik) Two minor points; I find picture content for a bgpiece that large a bit on the low side, especially in the last 2/3rds of the section. The preamble bit "She was apparently of either full or partial Vulcan heritage.", due to its ambiguous nature shouldn't be there in my opinion, but rather further up for example after or before "Despite her Vulcan stoicism, Saavik was seen crying at Spock's funeral." Instead of that sentence the preamble could be augmented by a comment in wordings like "Of particular note was her involvement with the failed Genesis project."--213.10.112.233 12:10, November 16, 2011 (UTC)